I'm giving you 50 points for the most eccentric comment so far on the site .. and i'm gonna try not to take the image with me of Anna Helianthus doing a poo on a fairytale loo hehehe

sorry jon, i just saw this comment .. i haven't finished my comment so changes are good, because i'll re-read and re-read again .. my comment is a work in progress, much like your poem i suspect haha ..

i'm also giving you 50 points for posting a work exclusive to freaklings .. so thank you ..

and i shall return to this in the near future as the cat to continue my comment

hahaha .. you have a point

*puts on the bad robot mask*

awarded 50 points for your in-depth critique

awarded 25 points for being the first to comment on a story here