At least it wasn't the worst, that's good, right? Reading back over this after reading your comment did make me see how generic it is. I will definitely work on it. I can't stand that sort of poem >.<

Thank you for commenting though. Long comment, but appreciated nonetheless =P

One more thing... In my opinion, I think that my older poems were better than the newer ones. I think the reason behind that was that I was just trying to find my little niche. But I still haven't found it. So just bear with me, please. I'll probably find it sooner or later. -_-; [Hopefully.]

You don't sound snobbish. I can see what you're saying. I wasn't going for a limerick poem. The idea just sort of popped into my head and I wasn't really trying to go for a deep and emotional poem, or dark, or any sort of poem really. I just thought it was a catchy little thing to write/say and it was sort of amusing, but that might only be because... well, I find that sort of stuff a little humorous [puns and all that sort of humor.]

You're right... It does sound like something you'd see on a Hallmark card.

I'm not trying to sound bitchy in this comment and if I do, I'm sorry. I really don't mean to.

Thanks for commenting on it though even though it's not your favourite sort of poem

If I remember correctly, I was sort of looking into Wicca and witchcraft and all that. I think that was one of the drives that set me to make this poem.

Thank you!!

Ohhhh. Thank you on that.

You're welcome!

I really do like this. I only wish I could see a bigger size of it.

It looks like you were just strolling in the forest and happened to come across this while others just passed by.

I wish I had your patience. If something took me six hours, it would have been torn up and burned.

Beautiful job!

Autopsy room with a broken hearted patient?????

That's what I saw... I could be wrong...

That's what I think I was going for. Escape. And I was going for the straightforward effect. And for the end I was going for the "End of paradise" sort of feeling.

I'm glad you still read and commented on it even though it's not your normal type of poem.

Thank you!

Glad you liked it. I'll work on it! Thanks!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this poem.

And I'm really happy that this site is up and running now and that I'm a member. Thanks for saying that you're happy to have me here! That made my day...

Oh thank you! I didn't catch those typos. Thanks for that.

And thank you for commenting!!! Glad you liked it!