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Ok This Isn't A Poem - It's A Marriage Announcement, filed under Poetry so perhaps you won't ignore!!
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
wow how exciting! good luck to planning it in 5 weeks!
i just want to give you many hugs!!
*dances*
take your time, the poetry contest will still be here...
once again congrats!
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december 9th? okay sounds good. i'll make time for this....stupid school! stupid finals!
hehe
i think the words you chose are totally super.

Post Mortem Tells A Story
ha i woke up less than an hour ago, and now i am leaving feedback on poetry.
but i did like this very much. a wonderful way to wake up
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yes this is a bit different from your usual style. but yes the narrator of this is ghost like, maybe your own spirit is passing by and watching this.
the innocence was a very good touch. a nice contrast to the death/autopsy.
the ending was good, but something felt a bit odd about it. i dunno, those last two lines didnt do it for me, but then again maybe i just have an irrational dislike of pockets. lol i dont know.
but the idealism at the end was fine. i dunno what im saying anymore
great job! and dont worry about the norm. it is different and a very enjoyable write.
~Tamara
verablue
ah i remember this piece! i just love it. i was going to copy/paste my fave quote, but i might as well re-type your poem in this box. a very accurate and poetic portrayal of miss verablue.
nice one
~Tamara
the iris
"as the blue flower
finally bowed
to kiss the guttered
pavement"
agh. i just loved that line. it's just a beautiful yet painful vision(well to me at least). but this, this painting definitely caught my eye. ~Tamara
View Commentsanskrit translator
there is something lovely and endearing about this. just wonderful. i feel as if you have just told me the most beautiful secret in the world. great write. ~Tamara
View CommentWelcome Members ..
i will get the word out to as many writers i know
i'll whore you out on facebook to all ym friends!
lol
i'm really liking being a freakling
they look so cute
hehe
Testing 1-2, 1-2 :P
yes this site is easier to use than VR and DV. and yes it will attract some people who do not indulge in the 'darker' side of art.
i am actually quite inspired to start writing now!
yay
good job!
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