Collective Amnesia's comments

Ok This Isn't A Poem - It's A Marriage Announcement, filed under Poetry so perhaps you won't ignore!!

December 14th, 2007

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
wow how exciting! good luck to planning it in 5 weeks!

i just want to give you many hugs!!

*dances*

take your time, the poetry contest will still be here...

once again congrats!

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Freaklings Contest #1

November 26th, 2007

december 9th? okay sounds good. i'll make time for this....stupid school! stupid finals!

hehe

i think the words you chose are totally super.

Laughing out loud

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Ch-ch-ch-changes!!

November 1st, 2007

well it looks fine on mozilla
Laughing out loud

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Post Mortem Tells A Story

October 31st, 2007

ha i woke up less than an hour ago, and now i am leaving feedback on poetry.

but i did like this very much. a wonderful way to wake up

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Post Mortem Tells A Story

October 31st, 2007

yes this is a bit different from your usual style. but yes the narrator of this is ghost like, maybe your own spirit is passing by and watching this.

the innocence was a very good touch. a nice contrast to the death/autopsy.

the ending was good, but something felt a bit odd about it. i dunno, those last two lines didnt do it for me, but then again maybe i just have an irrational dislike of pockets. lol i dont know.

but the idealism at the end was fine. i dunno what im saying anymore

great job! and dont worry about the norm. it is different and a very enjoyable write.
~Tamara

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verablue

October 31st, 2007

ah i remember this piece! i just love it. i was going to copy/paste my fave quote, but i might as well re-type your poem in this box. a very accurate and poetic portrayal of miss verablue.
nice one
~Tamara

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the iris

October 31st, 2007

"as the blue flower
finally bowed
to kiss the guttered
pavement"

agh. i just loved that line. it's just a beautiful yet painful vision(well to me at least). but this, this painting definitely caught my eye. ~Tamara

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sanskrit translator

October 31st, 2007

there is something lovely and endearing about this. just wonderful. i feel as if you have just told me the most beautiful secret in the world. great write. ~Tamara

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Welcome Members ..

October 27th, 2007

i will get the word out to as many writers i know

i'll whore you out on facebook to all ym friends!

lol

i'm really liking being a freakling
they look so cute
hehe

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Testing 1-2, 1-2 :P

October 27th, 2007

yes this site is easier to use than VR and DV. and yes it will attract some people who do not indulge in the 'darker' side of art.

i am actually quite inspired to start writing now!
yay

good job!

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