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all i can say is i LOVE this .. i wish i could leave a better comment for you

the final stanza .. perfection!!

Bouncer is dead?!?!?!

thanks Carl .. that's the kind of feel that i was hoping for with this one

i don't know .. nice colourful piccy though

i like your style .. and i loved your images in this ..

especially the disgorging disco ball .. beautifully done

nope it's 5000 bottletops

it's official .. and it's been open longer than two weeks so I think it's time I wrap this one up

Tetch is the winner with his fabulous poem "To my Starfall" .. congratulations Tetch ..

however .. I'm giving the two runner up's a free membership too for 3 months.. enjoy

Thanks all for voting and for contributing your poems into the contest

i adore the first stanza .. something magical about mermaids .. and the way you liken their scales to piano keys .. mus(e)ical ..

great piece Carl

i don't know what it is about this poem .. but i really like it!

"down highway prodigal suites
sky blue moon streaks
jealous silhouettes"

there is something about these three lines, almost makes you sway when you read it .. something jazz-esque and hypnotic in your words .. great work!

congratulations Carl

yeah .. i've got 3 on there .. i've sold maybe 10 .. lulu is great, but if you don't have the marketing know-how then it's not so great unfortunately ..