hahaha...i liked the upbeat sense of the poem...
like modern pop-punk bands and the SMS linggo with a touch of cynicism...very cool write

I trust that scotoma would do it's function properly
hahaha

wow, i've just been dropping by recently...too busy to hang around anymore...

but i'll get back to my notepad and poetry since my membership was upgraded

now only what to do with 5000 bottle caps @_@
hahahaha

Zen-like reflection of melancholy...

and the spacing really gives it more of a...

hmm...relaxed and empty feeling...

Astig may kababayan din ako dito sa Freaklings...

Hello Ate

Really has an epic potential...

i would really like to know more about the back-stories
and other stuff...

The Germanic mythological references really made it stand out with its interesting view of the world

...As cool as Niflheim and as steamy as Muspelheim...

Desire plunging to world into Chaos...

Very cool write...

glad to comeback to your writings after my hiatus

plug plug plug

where are the old songs? "Hey now, let's go?"

dammit jules

Hahahaha wow! Finally

Marrying seems like the trend nowadays hahaha!

Would anyone marry me...pleasseeee

Hahahaha what a fucker...

Jules is Gay

Loved this piece...and yeah, just like Jules said

fixed the typos and made the headers stand out more...

thanks for the comment and reminding me for the typo