Ah, gotcha

Hmm..Nice and cryptic. Does this relate to the poem or the comments above? I'm intrigued, Matt.

How droll..

=D...Thanks so much Jon, your comments mean a hell of a lot. Always appreciated and always a sign that I haven't just written the poetic equivalent of a turd

*breathes in* It's like I'm back in Corfu again

Wow..I'm honoured to have inspired this piece with one of my own works Really enjoyed the playful wordplay, rhyming and flow of this. *tips hat*

I hope you find my piece less scalene now

I've added to the poem and taken your advice about removing the 'Lady Geometry' line(very wise indeed ) Any critique/comments/uberpraise welcome

Is that an Irish cheers, I hear? Slainte!

Wow..Thanks for the comment, most definitely appreciated! Yeah, this is one of those short pieces I've thrown 'out there' because of my impatience to let the piece gestate into something more fully formed. I think this'll be one I'll adding to and mould once more lines 'come to me'(yep, I'm with the Eminem theory of don't force it, let the muse take you when she's ready). Your critique is pretty spot on, so no need to 'wag off' *raises glass* Cheers!